great job!
yeah great job especially considering your only 13, great drawings and nice animation but yeah the end did seem a little rushed. Try not to rush cartoons no matter how annoying and long they take to finish.
Reviews for "Gandalf's 'Adventures'"
green-lotus responds:
Thank you very much! I shall clear this up for any one who is unsure of my age, although you do believe me.
I AM 13 YEARS OF AGE.
Thank you also for the critisism.
rushed
started out really well done, then was just rushed at the end there.
green-lotus responds:
Ok so next I wont rush it, even though i didnt think it was, but the reviewer is mostly always right.
Your only 13?????
Wow, I have never seen clearer graphics in a flash before. That ROCKED!!!! The sound was the only problem. Work on that and you got it made!
green-lotus responds:
Yep, 13 is what I am. I doo work very hard on my graphics and put as much effort as I can into what I do, although I didnt really show my full potential in this. Anyway, YOU ROCK TOO!
Seriously?!
Dude, at 13 I could barely draw a beachball, never-the-less animate anything! You get a great deal of respect from me, you're sure to be a super-artist in the future! Keep it up! :D
green-lotus responds:
Cool DUDEY! i guess I am lucky to be able to stuff like this at my age. Thank you for the respect that you have given me!
Impressive animating skill.
If you are indeed 13 years old, you have a great future in animation. Yet you must work on your story telling. It lacked severely and good artwork alone can not save a piece. Also, sound is the MOST important part of any short film or animation, work on your sound design and you shall be grand.
green-lotus responds:
Yup, I'm 13, and I am greatly pleased that you think I have a good future (as do i :P). So now on I must work harder, especially on sound, and story!