boah boah
well what can i say it was reeeaaal good actually aspecially for ur age maby u can add some special effects to it like when frodo falls on the road maby a loud bang or something and the ending was rather wierd but anyways keep up the great work =)
Thanks!! Ill try and add more sound next time...and when I say next time I mean pretty soon...
It has potential...
Good work for your age. I do hope you’ll continue to develop and polish your style.
It moved well at the beginning, even though most of the plot was taken from the action of the first movie. Try creating your own ‘adventures,’ rather than taking them from the movie or the book.
The ending was rushed and didn’t really make much sense.
Overall, practice developing your own plot. Your animations are decent, but they need a good story to compliment them.
As for the music, it would have worked better if you changed it to suit the action. Just sticking a piece from the movie soundtrack and letting it play really doesn’t work.
All the same, nice effort. Keep it up! ;)
I appreciate this review very much for it goes into detail about what I have done correctly and falsely. Anything that you have pointed out I shall review upon my self and change to the standards they need to be. Thank you deeply for the well hotught out review.
not bad
but the sound sucks though
Yer it really does suck...A LOT. I guess I'll work on the, among other things, in my flash.
Onto my fav flash artist list you go ^^
Except for the sound (which didn't change) it was a really nice flash.
Every1 should also check out his muffin-movie. That one's real funny too.
YAY COOL DUDE! I, again, shall say sorry for anything that people didnt find satisfying, even though it looked like you liked it :P. Thanks for the quote on ma muffin movie to!
needs to be more original..
I really liked the animation style. One thing is that I dont see how it follows gandalf's adventure very much differently than in the movie. I would love to see more of his adventure's off on his own, if you've got the time to do so.
Thanks
I have LOADS of time on my hands and most of it is filled up with flash.
So a better story line is what is needed and originality.