Pulling a Simpsons.
If you jokes wern't dry and lame enough, this really does take the biscuit. This bored me to death and just shows what you are capable of when you try doing your own plots. I just hope you sit down one day and say "Ok, I am going to make a flash movie not is not based on any game/movie, does not have any refrences from any games/movies and I am going to sit here for a week and make sure that my jokes are funny and my plot is good." because you have totally lost what you did have.
You could always draw but not do a good plot or a good joke for shit.