Please try harder.
You need to 1) remove the white from around the sprites, 2) animate them more smoothly, and 3) not submit demos to NG. It says clearly on the submission page that partially completed works are to be submitted to NG.MAG, not the portal.
I could make something like this in half an hour, please put more work into it. If you work hard enough, everyone will praise your art. If you just slap stuff together, everyone will blam you.
ok, go make this in half an hour then, im counting on my watch now, gogo
That's it?
Well the sprites were okay, they just need to be cleaned up a bit so that there isn't any white bits around them. Also, it was fairly uneventful and wasn't too interesting.
Urgh.
Nothing turns me off a show faster than those "to be continued" episodes. They're too cheap to buy 2 blocks of time together from the network, so they make you wait a day, or a week, or however long they feel like, to know what the hell is going to happen in the end. Since it isn't costing *you* money to post, you don't even have *that* excuse.
Sloppy
Very blocky animation, and far too big for the length of it, and I would acutally call this a preveiw or prologue rather than the first episode. Hope it gets better as it goes along.
cool intro
do more Damn it! and make this the intro! this looks half done. make a point, not just a set up.
you've got a begining, but no middle or end.
I give this flash 0 for story, but it could be one of the better storys here so do more next time!
i dont think you get the point, this is the intro, this isnt an episode, just an intro, thats why its to be continued