Midnight Music
The intro wasn't that bad, it built into the song quite nicely then at 1:15 with the guitar part I wasn't sure but then it went slightly spanish and then I got into it. This great stuff. I'll look forward to hearing more of this in the future.
ya i gotta fix teh guitar transition better--it was done in the course of 5 minutes lol--but yeah, i guess. thanks for takin a look, im glad you enjoyed it :D
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5/5
Downloaded.
I hope this makes best of the week.
LIKES:
The way the outro and intro work pretty good from end, looping back to the beginning... you don't hear that very often.
The Intro was great.
The sounds used were not recognizable in FL studios, nice.
The mix wasn't too bad, Karco gave plenty of suggestions to fix that.
The score was great... i have no suggestions
I think you're really going to get pro quality on your next work... congrats.
DISLIKES:
The outro, needs to land the listener down more gently as well as alert us its coming to an end... if you don't know what I mean by these stupid metaphors PM me.
Length.... make it longer.
Guitar, as Karco said, centralize that guitar... and at times it becomes hidden, locate those spots and bring it out some. I do like that the guitar comes in panned (right i believe) but bring it to the middle at the latest after 1 measure.
The Bass..... i think for the most part the roughness of it is ok, but i would generally keep it smoother, until times you bring it out and you want it rough to bring it out for a moment and change the mood slightly, before going back into the general song feel. I would especially be careful with keeping it rough when it is just percussion and bass.... I would think maybe rough it as you lead into verse or chorus, or rough it at the start of the verse or chorus and then filter it back to a smoother state.
You know... if you do some better mixing you can easily have a vocalist in this, and it would just be brilliant!
PM when you have new work, and especially if you update this song.
RR
yeah the outtro got a little rushed sicne i was a) considering making it longer, and b) its intended to be thrown into a mix by my friend so i didn't really pay much attention to it, but given i expand it, ill do better hehe.
i thought the roughness was good, i tried to use the smoother one for smoother parts. but i guess its a little too rough? ill work on it.
and if iwere to do vocals, well, i'd center the mix around the vocalist, like in this remix i made: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/168894. now, to find a vocalist... hummm
i will do, and ill take a look at your stuff in a bit. maybei can whore myself enough to thwart the 0bombers on tuesday? haha
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A good song. I like how you put that guitar in there. I think I've never heard something like that before in a Trance song.
I also like the mixing of the song. Even though the main beat is pretty strong and loud it doesn't overpower the other melodies and everything can be heard just fine.
Only downside is that the main beat gets a little repetitive after a while. A few variations here and there sure would be a nice addition.
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yeah, maybe i can add some subtle details, but im probably not going to make it change too drastically too often--then it gets chaotic. theres a tipsy balance there... so ill see.
thanks for your thoughts and im glad you liked it!
Very good.
I thought this was a very solid song. It was well produced and composed. It had a solid bass line and groovy drum beat. I also thought that that the guitar is a nice addition. Overall it had two different ambiances: funk and techno. Good job catching these two feelings. A pretty good song all in all.
C52
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hehe i guess it worked :) thanks for givin your thoughts!
It's chilled out nicely.
I like the bass and melody used in this tune. It mixes in nicely with the beat.