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Reviews for "Sadness and Sorrow v.2"

Imagine.

No external sound. Just the sound of the music playing.

A man walking across the bridge to the city on a stormy night. Many cars pass by, the usual traffic to the city that never sleeps. He tosses the cigarette he was smoking to the ground and steps on it. He turns his body toward the traffic of the bridge and stares for a moment or two... or an eternity.

He steps back, leans over the bridge, and lets himself go. No fear. No pain. No emotion. He falls 10 stories. 20 stories. 30 stories. 100 stories... into the stormy waters below. There is no turning back from the inevitable impact. Except that impact never came.

He opens his eyes and he was right where he remembered. Back in his room, sitting against the wall on his bed in sweat pants and a tank top, cigarette in hand. Right where he ended up the previous four times he's tried this. He clenched down on his cigarette and just grunted.

He found himself back at the bridge. History repeats itself.

BlazingDragon responds:

Great description! It is quite a bit darker than anything others have suggested, but it is very well written. I love the line, "History repeats itself" albeit it being cliche.

Thanks for taking the time to review and be imaginative. You have a descriptive mind!

~Blaze

well well

this is an uniq piece and its beutiful

but is short it could have been longer ^^

BlazingDragon responds:

It is pretty short, but that's part of why I like it. Thanks for reviewing!

EH GOOD

not enough...

first there should be sadness than at the end big sweet ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!this the only song i dislike from yer songs.-_-

BlazingDragon responds:

Eh, big sweet rock wasn't what I was going for in this one. Just pure, mellow, sadness. To each his own, though.

Cute

It did not fit my taste, yes you are a pro, no doubt about that. But in my personal opinion... nah, cute, nice, well put, but not my kind.

BlazingDragon responds:

Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. However, I think it is only to review on quality rather than stylistic subjectivity. Thanks anyway.