Not bad
The animation was great, my only complaint is that it progresses very slowly. I would also recomment using some sort of speech bubbles for dialogue instead of the bars at the top or bottom.
Oh and finally, you really ought to proofread for spelling and grammar because the text was full of errors. That's fine to an extent but there were a LOT of errors in this one.
Overall though, it was pretty good and again, the animation was excellent, there was just too much dialogue in between it.
Thanks for the review. I am not the best of spellars anymore, this is evident. And it is because most people don't read words, they see symbols. For instance, I am l king f r a symb l. You can probably read and understand that sentance even though it is missing letters and if read actually makes no sence. I do believe in quality though and it should have been proofread more. On the story, it is how I wanted it except that I wanted longer to tell it. More cut scenes and longer story, as well as longer fight sequences. I do however beleive the the final fight on the good force side is really cool for sprites that were never meant to interact at all. You must remember that these sprites in the game when they fight, their sabers don't even touch. It is pretty rediculous that we even enjoyed the game. I did though. I also really enjoy the epic story of the light and dark side of humanity and how easy it is to be changed into a horrible monster all because of something that happened in life, for instance Adolf Hitler was an artist, it is all he ever wanted to be, but his father was a terrible man and beat him and abused him mentally and finally Adolf decided it was time to do something about it, he joined military school and the rest is history. If his father was a good man then possibly world war 2 never would have happened, no hollocaust no forced relocation, no nothing but some quality art, he was very talented, even if his father didn't see it. Thanks again for the review. I did everything I could on this peice, you have to remember that this is only my 4th flash and only my 1st sprite film.
That just kept going...
It was okay, but some scenes just kept going, and going. The opening crawl for example. Han talking with Luke in the falcon for another. Editing is a blessing
Boring
Had to shut it off in the middle. Almost died of bordem. Good effort though. Way to text heavy.
That's fine. Everyone has their own opinion. Which is great. Some like a good read. Others want to cut straight to the action. I am glad you reviewed my movie. Thanks
cool
its good for star wars, thats all i really have to say on it.
Spoiled by Darkside ending.
I enjoyed this movie but the Darkside ending spoiled it so I lowered the score.
Without the darkside ending I would give it overall 9.