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Eyes is too big.

That and I could see how the first couple of drawings were alright, but you haven't really improved at all.

Um...

Keep drawing though. Just try to save us all from the bad attempts. If you look at it and say to yourself "wow, I don't like how that turned out." Chances are we won't either... :\

Sorry, not trying to be harsh/rude, just letting you know what I think. Since, it seems that's what you're looking for.

That and don't use effects in photoshop. Pleeeaaaase. It takes NO skill. Learn to do it by hand, and then maybe you'll improve, k? Try it out sometime.

your first drawing showed potential, but your new "work" lacks effort. it seems as though ur only doing this to build up your thread. where is the arts love gone man?!

At 1/9/09 02:19 PM, Rhunyc wrote: Eyes is too big.

That and I could see how the first couple of drawings were alright, but you haven't really improved at all.

Um...

Keep drawing though. Just try to save us all from the bad attempts. If you look at it and say to yourself "wow, I don't like how that turned out." Chances are we won't either... :\

Sorry, not trying to be harsh/rude, just letting you know what I think. Since, it seems that's what you're looking for.

That and don't use effects in photoshop. Pleeeaaaase. It takes NO skill. Learn to do it by hand, and then maybe you'll improve, k? Try it out sometime.

you are the least rude person ive had tell me this stuff, well one fo the least rude ^^ and i no i effect rape alot lol XD

At 1/9/09 04:06 PM, UMREE wrote: your first drawing showed potential, but your new "work" lacks effort. it seems as though ur only doing this to build up your thread. where is the arts love gone man?!

realy i never come here im only on deviant art.

The first one is really good...i take it that these are meant to be fantasy/cartoon. However the second is not so good but considering your age...you'll get better!

At 1/10/09 04:46 AM, Azza451 wrote: The first one is really good...i take it that these are meant to be fantasy/cartoon. However the second is not so good but considering your age...you'll get better!

thx for the coment but please dont only look at the 2 first i posted a year ago.

Your massive file is probably because it looks like you drew a really really big image and then just tweened the whole thing to look like a vcam. Tweens often make a file alot larger and that is a pretty big tween if I'm correct.

Well, It seems to me that you use to many filters and effects, now that's great if you want to be an effect heavy artist but before you do that you have to master something called "drawing" I don't think you've mastered that skill yet...

At 1/10/09 06:57 PM, The-Scourge wrote: Your massive file is probably because it looks like you drew a really really big image and then just tweened the whole thing to look like a vcam. Tweens often make a file alot larger and that is a pretty big tween if I'm correct.

there is no tween in it at all its all frame by frame hand drawn. maybe to many frames?

At 1/10/09 09:10 PM, wasb wrote: Well, It seems to me that you use to many filters and effects, now that's great if you want to be an effect heavy artist but before you do that you have to master something called "drawing" I don't think you've mastered that skill yet...

im no where near a master, but i hope to be one. and i am a effect raper.

here is a pic i did with some lineart i edited and colored...i was bored lol...

Pretty nice artwork there, dude ;)

here a new pic and oh thx hmm i hit the wrong button no quoght but yeah the guy abouve me im saying thx to =]...

me =] and blah blah blah

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At 1/13/09 06:08 PM, king7272777 wrote: me =] and blah blah blah

I really can't see why you keep posting color-edited pictures, filter rapes, scribbles that you have to work more on to even be called intresting (I think you know that), and refuse to take in any of the critique given to you..

As someone before me said, as far as i know this is the only thread that has downgraded since its first post. Why do you think that is?

And please don't take this in a negative way, im trying to help you.

At 1/11/09 12:24 AM, king7272777 wrote: here is a pic i did with some lineart i edited and colored...i was bored lol...

Her vagina is way off. Draw a line from her neck to her hips, and draw to realize how much it twists. Add the snapping sound effect to your own accord. Also, her vaginal slit is a bit to big, unless she's running trains, if so, that's totally cool, but otherwise you may want to lower it's size ultimately. I like the hair.

At 1/15/09 07:15 PM, LaserKarl wrote:

At 1/13/09 06:08 PM, king7272777 wrote: me =] and blah blah blah

I really can't see why you keep posting color-edited pictures, filter rapes, scribbles that you have to work more on to even be called intresting (I think you know that), and refuse to take in any of the critique given to you..

As someone before me said, as far as i know this is the only thread that has downgraded since its first post. Why do you think that is?

And please don't take this in a negative way, im trying to help you.

i no im going down hill i just dont no how to do any of the things people are telling me i dont have much resores as to art, and i cant stop filter rape i just like how it looks... and i know i shuld stop posting but i just cant......................

At 1/15/09 08:09 PM, Jonas wrote:

At 1/11/09 12:24 AM, king7272777 wrote: here is a pic i did with some lineart i edited and colored...i was bored lol...

Her vagina is way off. Draw a line from her neck to her hips, and draw to realize how much it twists. Add the snapping sound effect to your own accord. Also, her vaginal slit is a bit to big, unless she's running trains, if so, that's totally cool, but otherwise you may want to lower it's size ultimately. I like the hair.

i know its crap i was just bored... i dont fell like fixing it but thx for the criqu ill take it into mind nxt time i feel like drawin hentai.......

hm since the first post, and after all these pages, I thought you would of improved more than you have.

I guess its not too bad as the thread is under a year old and you've been having a go at everything. my advice is if you're serious about art, pick one aspect and practice your ass off, you have good productivity and by the time you're 17-18 you should be at a decent level, if you just like it as a hobby then by all means carry on experimenting. Theres nothing wrong with experimenting, its what i did when i was about 12-13, I used to do logos, graphics, mock up websites, as well as painting and drawing and I feel that the lessons I learned from all these areas benefited each other.

ill post a look back at my own progression, might inspire you or something :P

wow you made a progression dude. That shark picture is amazing.

At 1/16/09 09:36 AM, Razac wrote: hm since the first post, and after all these pages, I thought you would of improved more than you have.

I guess its not too bad as the thread is under a year old and you've been having a go at everything. my advice is if you're serious about art, pick one aspect and practice your ass off, you have good productivity and by the time you're 17-18 you should be at a decent level, if you just like it as a hobby then by all means carry on experimenting. Theres nothing wrong with experimenting, its what i did when i was about 12-13, I used to do logos, graphics, mock up websites, as well as painting and drawing and I feel that the lessons I learned from all these areas benefited each other.

ill post a look back at my own progression, might inspire you or something :P

right now im into photos and i like taking them and its easyer but yeah your right i need to stick to a stile... heres somthing random.. i made yesterday i know its not good but i kinda like it,

i love it

The things you shoot aren't actually art. Check out deviantArt there are some nice photo artists there. Taking a photo of yourself or your sister isn't art, its just a photo of a person. A photograph is judged by its content, not by the effects you use on it.

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