At 1/1/13 10:37 AM, creepyboy wrote:
FIRST POST OF 2013!
I made a background to my Superman picture, because I'm super bored. Anyway, do you think I should submit it to the art portal?
Submit away. Looks good. I like the colors you chose for the background as well as the texture you used for it.
The shading is a little off on the nose and mouth. All of your other shadows have the light source coming from the right whereas the nose and mouth have it coming from up above.
This may just be because you're getting used to your tablet but the lines could use some more care. The variation in line thickness seems arbitrary in places, and some of them don't seem carefully placed such as the nose and the ears. The nice thing about vector art is that you can edit your lines after you make them without having to erase at them or redraw them entirely.
Otherwise solid piece. I'm a big fan of simple vector art. The often-risky dead center, front facing position works well here, giving it a strong, intense composition.