At 4/1/11 05:01 PM, DemonWolfBlood wrote:
I don't take criticism well 'cause I'm fifteen and have anger issue
Then what are you doing posting things on the internet?
Shouldn't you be shoving these in a shoe box, sliding said box under your bed and then listening to Linkin Park as you sob silently in the corner?
Meh, maybe that's beside the point. Now an actual Critique, rather than critiquing your ability to take a critique.
You need to work on on anatomy, The breast of the cat girl is off.
You need to work on your perspective, as well as trying to get your character on a proper ground plane. At the moment, if this cat girl was on a ground plane, then she would be leaning back hard on her right foot.
Makes sure to work well on your under drawings and underlying structure. Cause if the foundation is off, the the final product is off.
Work on your composing, not only is the girl pretty much dead center, but you have a lot of useless blank space. And to top that off, the flaws in the drawing really destroy the dynamics of the pose its self. There are times when you want that white space, but usually only when a character is looking or moving in a certain direction.
As a last bit, don't just link us to your dA, most of us don't care for it. If you have spare work that you don't want to put in the portal, or isn't right for the portal, then post it here. Don't just say "Here is my Gallery [Link] Go check it out!" cause that translates to most of us as "Hey, I'm too cool and lazy to put in the effort of posting my work, so you have to go dig it your self to praise my awesomeness."
Look forward to seeing more post from you, and Welcome to the art forum.