At 12/28/10 02:08 AM, homojesus wrote:
There's way too much space at the top here in the sky. You have a large expanse of simple clouds with nothing in front to occupy all of that area. You could either draw in some more objects or you could design some intense sky design. Or you could crop it. Either way work, but I also feel like there needs to be another object in the middleground or foreground. Even if you were to crop it, it feels unbalanced.
I think you need some more contrast on the sword that she's holding. If I move my head down so that my monitor distorts the colors, I can see that you have some shading there, but otherwise, it looks like an almost entirely white blotch in the middle of the drawing. So, it could use a contrast boost. Or possibly some ambient light could fix it. Or perhaps it would be easier to make it metal instead of (presumably) stone?
The rocks and the grass are done beautifully, though. There is a lot of great tonal depth there and I hope that you add that same depth to the sky.