At 12/18/10 11:09 AM, big-jonny-13 wrote:At 12/18/10 10:41 AM, homojesus wrote: You can tell there is alot of unthought out texture spamming going on. I did wing it after all. My next one will be beter.Looks like a lovechild between the Boomer and the Tank (from L4D).
I knew I reminded me of somthing!
At 12/18/10 05:57 PM, YellowisCOOL wrote: wow u r really good!! u should think about posting ur artwork to the Art Portal!! :)
but I does!
At 12/22/10 04:13 AM, homojesus wrote: tenshoe kyakyuo!
uh...
Chun-li in a jump suit eh? Reminds me a bit of the banana suit from Bruce Lee, and (the copied) Kill Bill.
I think the resemblance in kill bills costume was a nod to bruce lee.
At 12/22/10 08:52 PM, homojesus wrote: weird, as I get better, less people comment.
They're just jealous, dude.
Having a quick look at your art and I have to say its very impressive, hope to see more soon.
At 12/22/10 11:35 PM, Zodape wrote: Awesome art. I want to see MOAR.
Im working on a 3d peice as well as the Wip posted above.
At 12/22/10 08:52 PM, homojesus wrote: weird, as I get better, less people comment.
Simple logic my friend, people in the art forums pretty much want to point out mistakes. (Which is the main thing that separates us to sites like DA) If they can't seem to see anything they will not want to comment because they don't want to leave useless posts like: Your awesome or any other two word sentences that give nothing but an ego stroke.. So that pretty much explains everything. :P
Your awesome.
At 12/28/10 02:08 AM, homojesus wrote: whipagainh
There's way too much space at the top here in the sky. You have a large expanse of simple clouds with nothing in front to occupy all of that area. You could either draw in some more objects or you could design some intense sky design. Or you could crop it. Either way work, but I also feel like there needs to be another object in the middleground or foreground. Even if you were to crop it, it feels unbalanced.
I think you need some more contrast on the sword that she's holding. If I move my head down so that my monitor distorts the colors, I can see that you have some shading there, but otherwise, it looks like an almost entirely white blotch in the middle of the drawing. So, it could use a contrast boost. Or possibly some ambient light could fix it. Or perhaps it would be easier to make it metal instead of (presumably) stone?
The rocks and the grass are done beautifully, though. There is a lot of great tonal depth there and I hope that you add that same depth to the sky.
At 12/31/10 12:15 PM, InsertFunnyUserName wrote:
its cool man im on it, It is a work in progress. I think some of the things youve mentioned ive already taken care of in the more recent version. If it complements the picture ill ad somthing flying in the BG, well see.
thanks man!
not too ambitious, ill do a a full body next.
Had a blast!
yea, i wanted more detail in the skin so. instead of leave it like that...
help!
does the perspective look ok, in this. I cant totaly tell.
At 1/6/11 05:07 PM, homojesus wrote: help!
does the perspective look ok, in this. I cant totaly tell.
His foot is bent way too much upwards, definitely need to tilt it down a good bit.
At 1/6/11 05:07 PM, homojesus wrote: help!
does the perspective look ok, in this. I cant totaly tell.
his right leg seems a bit awkward... with that bend in it; his left leg is odd cause the upper leg is longer than the lower leg; which would require it to be bent at an unnatural angle. Dont think you need to change the foot (as jonny said) if you fix the leg.
NEVER LOOSE FAITH IN MANCUNT
thanks guys, i think Ive got it. but this is what ive been working on currently.
Wow, why does new grounds hate my model so much (it scored realy low in the AP).
any who, another 3d prodject WIP. its supposed to be a hitmonchan revamp. critiques orinput aapreciated!
At 2/4/11 10:08 AM, MikeRomanul wrote: Her arms look REALLY manly.
As well with this, I think the arrows look pretty weird. Shouldn't the skin be going in, rather than around the arrows?
