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At 11/4/10 05:25 AM, homojesus wrote: tis me again.
Your good. What i find to be a problem is that the bottom persons hair is extremely over sized and the sword is very big and makes her head look small and it just looks a bit odd. Also I don't like her eyes, I think if you went for a more realistic style of eye it'd be much better. The top person i like muchly, it's really good. Your shading & colouring is great.
On second thought, I think the colors lack saturation, if it makes much of a difference ill change it.
At 11/4/10 06:57 AM, CloudEater wrote:At 11/4/10 05:25 AM, homojesus wrote: tis me again.... What i find to be a problem is that the bottom persons hair is extremely over sized and the sword is very big and makes her head look small and it just looks a bit odd.
I just love overdoing things man. big hair and giant swords FTW!
At 11/4/10 11:29 AM, Jow279 wrote: I think it gives more dymanic to the drawing,
yes, the sword is kinda exagereted, but it doesn't make her head smaller, and big swords are badass
Since all the drawing is not realistic, giving her realistic eyes would be just odd.
lol, your an idiot. The really big sword is fine but the hair is stupidly oversized and 'gives more dynamic' wot dus dis meen? I don't mean 100% realistic, I mean more realistically styled. They just need to be shaped normally and not be so big.
At 11/4/10 12:55 PM, Jow279 wrote: And what i mean by ''gives more dynamic'' is gives more moviment, more action to the drawing.
Size doesn't convey movement, shapes does. If the hair was 4 times smaller it'd show the same motion just that it'd be not as out of proportion. But anyway your bled and good job jesus, the saturation seems fine.
yo, people seem to dislike this one compared to my other works in the art prtal. Any one throw me a bone? I can take it.
At 11/7/10 03:40 AM, homojesus wrote: no nothing?
are you guys scared cuz of mah skillz?
I know Jonny's gonna say this but I'll go ahead. Please refrain from bumping your thread with no pics if you don't have a valid reason. But I say your very good, your pure awesomeness. We are scared to comment because we like to post about mistakes. And you don't appear to have one.
And you haven't posted a new pic so why bother?
At 11/7/10 05:13 AM, Fifty-50 wrote: I know Jonny's gonna say this but I'll go ahead. Please refrain from bumping your thread with no pics if you don't have a valid reason. But I say your very good, your pure awesomeness. We are scared to comment because we like to post about mistakes. And you don't appear to have one.
Oh I see plenty mistakes, just afraid that Ill get lynched by you fanboys.
At 11/8/10 01:23 AM, homojesus wrote: like what?
Lol, I knew someone was gonna get back at me for that....
It mostly was just a witty remark without a lot of underlying truth to it, but while im posting:
I agree with cloudy about the eyes and hair in the last one. I have absolutely no problem with blowing certain stuff up and stepping away for normality, its just that I dont like the shape of the hair. It looks more like some metal contraption to me than actual hair.
As for the eyes, Id have liked it if they looked a bit more like the demons eyes as opposed to that whole big watermelon eyes thing. (just a personal preference probably).
The Demonnes is very well done, her boobs seem a bit too firm to me and perhaps a bit high on her body. Furthermore her body seems odly angled into her tail. It would have been nice if you had had the tail curve up a bit before joining the body. Technically it is probably possible the way you have it now, just doesnt seem comfortable; It could also work if she was moving in the top right direction, but then her hair would have to be at the other side of her head.
It took me quite some time to realize that the brown/grey swipe in front is also her tail, maybe you could have it come back in screen for the tip again to make that more clear, or perhaps give the tails some detail or perhaps fins...
Good job on the background, linework and coloring although one last remark about the composition:
it seems a bit stiff/unnatural... posed. Both characters are basically standing still, and they arent even interacting with each other. Also composition wise its a bit boring. I dont know if youre familiar with the rule of thirds but that basically says you should draw a 3*3 grid on your canvas (so 9 areas) and align elements in your composition along those lines and crossings. (see example).
Anyways, this is me nitpicking, but you wanted comments so I hope it helps, keep up the great work.
here is somore work in progress :p
let me have it you sissys. Im going to try and update the madness entry becasue I fell as if I didnt finish the previuos one.
At 11/15/10 02:55 PM, homojesus wrote: let me have it you sissys. Im going to try and update the madness entry becasue I fell as if I didnt finish the previuos one.
The zombie are coming along really great. You better get rid of that moon and do your own. Also the shells seem a bit odd and don't seem to fit in with everything else. His chest and stomach muscles are extremely high up.
thanks man, ill make sure to look into those things now sense im going at it fresh and have unlimited time.
At 11/17/10 11:14 PM, ZX wrote: i like it but she should wear clothes especially if your a homo jesus you shouldnt be drawing naked women
Oh, yeah Ill zap you with my warlock powers then you wont think its very funny.
Thanks guys! Your advice here as well as in other threads is golden!
whoopee! first modeling attempt. About an hour an a half. will move onto more difficult prodjcts later on, kinda sucks but im mostly trying to learn to navigate and use the brushes.
Had a blast!
Critiques for next time are always welcome.
At 11/30/10 11:43 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:At 11/30/10 11:31 PM, homojesus wrote: wow, no visitors?The ear seems a bit lumpy, needs to be thinned out at the top.
Yea, I do need to find a different method to do ears. Eyes too.
Still bustin 2d though. lol.
I realy need to buckle down and dedicate some major time to Z brush....
the aplication technique is sloppy reason being that 3 hours where waisted because PS crashed twice during the making.
At 10/20/10 04:23 AM, homojesus wrote: i always take critizism mkay?
Left leg too thick
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Another all nighter in the bag. I could of posed him allittle better but ive been up for a while and its the first 3d that ive spent over 2 hours on. haha.
You can tell there is alot of unthought out texture spamming going on. I did wing it after all. My next one will be beter.