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Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-09 20:46:32 Reply

Recently, I've seen many users here on Newgrounds who have set up threads to showcase thier art on the forums, so I thought that It was abot time that I set one up too. You know, as a sort of home base. Feel free to check out my latest arts and give feedback on them. Please be honest with your critiques, I'd like to improve. Here's a piece to kick off the thread with. It features a new character of mine that I'm trying out. His name is Rob the Zombie. You like?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-09 20:50:39 Reply

Very basic, and rather bland.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-10 20:05:47 Reply

At 11/9/09 08:50 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote: Very basic, and rather bland.

That's definitely a fair critisism. My next art will be much, much more detailed, and I'll post it up here when it's done.


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-10 21:16:18 Reply

I like (the concept), not the art very much though.
All I see are a few rectangles with eyes and mouths and curved lines for arms.
Bland.
Boring.
Horrid.

Now, if you added more detail, maybe some shadowing, you could make this specific one look OK, but, I dont think you will get the reactions you are hoping for here if the drawings keep looking like that

Is this criticism more fair?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-10 21:23:58 Reply

"I'm really confused, yo."
I don;t get it, if the blue zombies were doing something more like thriller and he was doing, say, hammer time it'd be more obvious, but the way it is now, the rob seems to be doing thriller.
The art, its boxes colored in, what can I say?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 12:15:40 Reply

Righto, more details. Got it. Also, the point was that Rob was doing the Thriller, but the wrong part of the Thriller. Maybe I should've had him doing the Soulja Boy or something a little more obvious. Anyway, thanks for the replies. Now here's a more detailed piece that I did in response to the requests for, well, more details. It's a parody on Fancy Pants and it hasn't been posted to my account yet because I want to get Brad Borne's approval of it before I officially submit it. That would be really cool. Anyways, what do you think of this?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 14:42:05 Reply

Interesting...

BUT DRAW YOUR OWN MAYO


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 15:10:05 Reply

At 11/11/09 02:42 PM, Snowman wrote: BUT DRAW YOUR OWN MAYO

^^^^This.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 15:44:05 Reply

At 11/11/09 02:42 PM, Snowman wrote: Interesting...

BUT DRAW YOUR OWN MAYO

Hm...you know, I sort of like the real mayo, but it seems like a lot of people think I should do my own. It's definitely something to consider.


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 17:31:49 Reply

Hm...you know, I sort of like the real mayo, but it seems like a lot of people think I should do my own. It's definitely something to consider.

Thats nice you like to use the real mayo

you wont be saying that when you get sued from hellmans, Becasue you can

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 18:43:00 Reply

I vote for the real mayo..


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-11 18:51:38 Reply

you wont be saying that when you get sued from hellmans, Becasue you can

I have a disclaimer on all my art for that exact reason...but it's not like I'm making a profit on these drawings anyways.


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-13 15:28:45 Reply

Sorry for the double post...

Anyways, how does the population of the art forum like Twitchy Te Bear? Good, yes, no?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-13 16:59:51 Reply

At 11/13/09 03:28 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Sorry for the double post...

Anyways, how does the population of the art forum like Twitchy Te Bear? Good, yes, no?

Eh...Twitchy as you address him is also too simplistic for my liking.Also,the tree's look flat.You shuld have added shading to them.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-13 17:31:32 Reply

At 11/13/09 03:28 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Anyways, how does the population of the art forum like Twitchy Te Bear? Good, yes, no?

When did his arm become an elastic band, stretching at will?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-14 00:19:52 Reply

At 11/13/09 03:28 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Sorry for the double post...

Anyways, how does the population of the art forum like Twitchy Te Bear? Good, yes, no?

Maybe you should name him Honey Fingers instead.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-14 11:12:09 Reply

At 11/13/09 05:31 PM, big-jonny-13 wrote:
At 11/13/09 03:28 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Anyways, how does the population of the art forum like Twitchy Te Bear? Good, yes, no?
When did his arm become an elastic band, stretching at will?

Oh, did I forget to mention that Twitchy can bend reality? Yeah, that's kind of important. Also, this is not Salad Fingers related at all. The concepts are sort of similar, but the characters are very different, so relax.


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-14 11:26:51 Reply

i dont know how to describe your art, i like some of it even though i know i shouldnt, i like the way you changed fancy pants to a hunchback monster though but the first and last pic just too boring and wierd

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-15 12:28:11 Reply

At 11/11/09 02:42 PM, Snowman wrote: Interesting...

BUT DRAW YOUR OWN MAYO

As you wish. I've decided to use my own mayo after all due to popular demand. Here's the new version with my own mayo. I also made the x's in the spider's eyes much more noticeable. Now what do you think?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-15 12:45:48 Reply

At 11/15/09 12:28 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Here's the new version with my own mayo.

Fits better now.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-17 20:34:19 Reply

I've had this on my page for awhile, but only one person reviewed it so I figured I'd bring it here for opinions. I'm not sure how this is, honestly, I have mixed opinions. What do you think Newgrounds?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-17 20:45:05 Reply

At 11/15/09 12:28 PM, Spunky6666 wrote:

As you wish. I've decided to use my own mayo after all due to popular demand. Here's the new version with my own mayo. I also made the x's in the spider's eyes much more noticeable. Now what do you think?

Yay, hand drawn mayo

now make him fancyer by giving him a tophat and monocle

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-21 20:45:48 Reply

Yay, hand drawn mayo

Glad that you're happy. A lot of people were asking for me to draw my own mayonnaise, and it was getting pretty hard to refuse. Also, I'm still looking for feedback on my Mario pic, so if anyone reading this could give me some, it would be highly appreciated. Thanks!


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-21 20:51:25 Reply

At 11/21/09 08:45 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Also, I'm still looking for feedback on my Mario pic, so if anyone reading this could give me some, it would be highly appreciated. Thanks!

Mario is not bad, probably referenced, but nothing wrong with that.
The bottom right point of the star is too short.
The goombas have too rounded heads. They have to be thinner at the top and spread out more at the bottom.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-21 20:53:37 Reply

Okay then, Well, first, the background, you really shouldve drawn your own, but ill let that slide (for now) The mario is ok, however, delete the lines under him, I dont see lines under me when i jump do i? The goombas, or whatever those things are called, sont really look like theyre supposed to, they look like a ball of chocolate on a stick....

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-21 23:41:29 Reply

Your works aren't that artistic, you may do well animating though. You should experiment more with shading maybe trying a more realistic picture instead of cartoon style.

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-22 17:50:23 Reply

At 11/21/09 11:41 PM, CloudEater wrote: Your works aren't that artistic, you may do well animating though. You should experiment more with shading maybe trying a more realistic picture instead of cartoon style.

Well then, I'd say this is a good compromise. I realize that this probably needs some (meaning a lot of) cleaning up, but I tried a more realistic and sketchy grayscale while still staying true to my cartoony/humorous roots. What do you think? Did I do the realistic thing any justice here?

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-22 19:50:41 Reply

you need to outline some of your art. your coloring could use some work

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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-22 19:57:43 Reply

At 11/22/09 05:50 PM, Spunky6666 wrote: Well then, I'd say this is a good compromise. I realize that this probably needs some (meaning a lot of) cleaning up, but I tried a more realistic and sketchy grayscale while still staying true to my cartoony/humorous roots. What do you think? Did I do the realistic thing any justice here?

Unfortunately, no. I do see your attempt however. But, they need arms, legs, and there head should be more, more head shaped, not completely rounded.
i am having a little bit of trouble seeing it, but thats a scanner thing.
But, why is it on like a flag, or is it supposed to be a reflection off of a scythe ? its very hard to tell


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Response to Spunky6666 Land 2009-11-22 20:44:01 Reply

Unfortunately, no. I do see your attempt however. But, they need arms, legs, and there head should be more, more head shaped, not completely rounded.
i am having a little bit of trouble seeing it, but thats a scanner thing.
But, why is it on like a flag, or is it supposed to be a reflection off of a scythe ? its very hard to tell

Hm, so it needs work... I gotta say, I'm not totally lovin' this either. I'll try and refine this, but I don't know, I think I'm just going to stick with cartoony, it comes way more naturally. Oh, and yes, that was supposed to be a scythe.


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