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Response to Entrys of various delineation Mar. 21st, 2012 @ 06:05 AM Reply

At 1 hour ago, M-Vero wrote: Progress.
Thought on the shading as it is now would be much appreciated.

So I never played Journey or anything, so forgive me, but is that a person under the cloth? or something else? Just wondering since the left side ("front") of the form seems really flat and doesn't suggest any shape.
On second thought, I just googled the game and their art doesn't suggest more than that, so I guess it's whatever.
I think it'd still look cool though...

Also that Fizz looks cute :3
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Response to Entrys of various delineation Mar. 21st, 2012 @ 06:55 AM Reply

At 2 hours ago, M-Vero wrote: Progress.
Thought on the shading as it is now would be much appreciated.

Great dynamic in your lines and such. I like the gradient thing you got going in your shading, but I think you overdid it in the left bottom of the cloak.


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Response to Entrys of various delineation Mar. 21st, 2012 @ 07:54 PM Reply

At 13 hours ago, Kashi wrote:
So I never played Journey or anything, so forgive me, but is that a person under the cloth? or something else? Just wondering since the left side ("front") of the form seems really flat and doesn't suggest any shape.
On second thought, I just googled the game and their art doesn't suggest more than that, so I guess it's whatever.

Yeah the in game models imply little more than stick figures underneath the cloaks.

At 12 hours ago, Lundsfryd wrote:
Great dynamic in your lines and such. I like the gradient thing you got going in your shading, but I think you overdid it in the left bottom of the cloak.

I was thinking that last night, but usually when I do shading on something, I'll let it sit for a day and go back to it to see if I still think that or decide it actually looks alright, and I completely agree, way to much.


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Response to Entrys of various delineation Apr. 7th, 2012 @ 04:42 AM Reply

There is one time of year where I will use the word swag unironically.
And thatâEUTMs when I go to paxeast and get a shit ton of said swag.

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Aug. 11th, 2012 @ 05:41 AM Reply

I've been in the longest of funks for the quitest of whiles now.
guildwars sketching.

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Aug. 11th, 2012 @ 09:11 AM Reply

At 8/11/12 05:41 AM, M-Vero wrote: I've been in the longest of funks for the quitest of whiles now.
guildwars sketching.

I love the shifty look on his face. Nicely done so far. Is this just practice or are you going to finish this?


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Response to Entrys of various delineation Aug. 12th, 2012 @ 05:02 AM Reply

Progresso

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Aug. 13th, 2012 @ 01:29 AM Reply

More progresso
extra chunky

noticed the ears might be a tad lopsided, sticking that under revisions for later.

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Aug. 14th, 2012 @ 05:11 AM Reply

Finished inking

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 14th, 2013 @ 09:10 AM Reply

So I'm making a flash.
Incredibly rough animatic. timing is off, no faces/props/details of any kind.
Looking for critique on the body language for now.

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 14th, 2013 @ 09:19 AM Reply

At 1/14/13 09:10 AM, M-Vero wrote: So I'm making a flash.
Incredibly rough animatic. timing is off, no faces/props/details of any kind.
Looking for critique on the body language for now.

Definitely has a good sense of character to it, the bodies do portray expression well.
Where's the audio from?

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 14th, 2013 @ 09:25 AM Reply

Jbriner
Figured I'd save the credit for when it's actually done.
I'll still do that, but as not to leave you hangin' for weeks


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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 14th, 2013 @ 12:56 PM Reply

I like seeing the progress work. It's great to see an image taking form from sketch to finish, you've got some great skills! Keep it up!

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 14th, 2013 @ 01:47 PM Reply

At 1/14/13 09:10 AM, M-Vero wrote: So I'm making a flash.
Incredibly rough animatic. timing is off, no faces/props/details of any kind.
Looking for critique on the body language for now.

Shit, that was great. Makes me wanna try to do a rough animation for some audio.


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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 14th, 2013 @ 04:12 PM Reply

At 1/14/13 09:25 AM, M-Vero wrote: Jbriner
Figured I'd save the credit for when it's actually done.
I'll still do that, but as not to leave you hangin' for weeks

He did a fabulous job with the audio, and you made a marvelous storyboard for it.
Can't wait to see it finished.

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 30th, 2013 @ 07:31 AM Reply

Animatic finished.
A lot of the sounds dont sync with the rough loops at the moment so keep that in mind.


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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 30th, 2013 @ 07:55 AM Reply

At 1/30/13 07:31 AM, M-Vero wrote: Animatic finished.
A lot of the sounds dont sync with the rough loops at the moment so keep that in mind.

Looking good

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Response to Entrys of various delineation Jan. 30th, 2013 @ 10:12 AM Reply

Looking sooo nice! I can't wait to see this all finished.