drum and piano work in progress
any advice from anyone, music making veterans or not, would be greatly apreciated
if you DO like this song, i have two others very similar to it, so if you want completed tracks, then you can go get those
peace out, please review, vote, and give advice
SessileNomad
p.s. god its been a while since ive even looked at this track, those reeverb crashes are pretty bad...lol
like the intro
i write as i hear. the piano works very well with the drums, added synth makes good background, i gotta do that sometime, around 1 min is a really cool riff,
you need a slow down later on in the song, but not as the tempo slow, then speed it up to add a dynamic twist to it.
+This+ song has great potential, it can go so much better
yeah i kinda plan to make a slowed down part, but my pc jsut started fucking up again so, i porlby wont finish this for like, ever
roflcopters flying around
The crashes aren't too bad, they just lack punch. Maybe a little more dry signal is needed.
I like the chill ambience. The background ambience adds depth to the song too even though you used the I-VI-III-VII progression in the beginning, that everyone else uses. Oh well, there's a good reason everyone uses it hahaha
I predict that this song will be unbelievably amazing when it's done. Make sure to send me a PM when it's done!
lol thanks to my keyboarding lessons, i actually know what your saying now with the I-VI-III-VII stuff
BUT, my pc has(as i guessed) started fucking up again, so it should probly be a while b4 its done
thx for review, ill def add more dry to the crash, and probly time it better, cuz i remember doing somthing stupid with the timing on this one
Woah man
This is extremely inspiring. I just don't like how the drums come in so sudden, no build-up. That piano lead is epic and the drums are pretty good.
yeah its pretty great piano lead i think its the best piano of all the ones ive ever used
yeah my other tracks like this have little builds b4 the drums come in, this on is a little more sudden
thx for reviewing
awsome
im sry i cant give any creative in site but i think it sounds amazing keep it up
ah well, if you like the wip then i guess thats as much as you need to say, thanks for reviewing though
peace out
lovin the piano
have you tryed addin a drum solo it might work out you no
hmm, you know ive never thought about that, mabye makin the piano chill out and try my luck with some drum tricks..., im likein that idea man
thanks alot
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
SessileNomad 
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