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I like the background; it's pretty simple but gives a nice contrast to the monster and just in general a little more to look at. It could maybe do with a few more finer details, such as more objects in the background, but as it is, it's fine, and the kind of light pattern it has really works well.

THe monster itself could maybe do with some work. Colour-wise it's pretty nice and the subtle change in shades in the body and eyes are done pretty well (Though the shading's a little too sharp in some of the smaller lower eyes). But the outline of it could definitely use a second look; the thinness and sharpness of it makes it feel less realistic, and in parts (like a bit on the left-hand side) it strays away from the colour of the body itself. The feet are probably the weakest part of this; they're got no colour to them, so instantly stick out. Maybe just giving them a light felsh-tone would improve them greatly. The toes as well were a little odd, but I think with some shading they'd be fine. This has potential, but there's definitely a little room for improvement; just keep working at it.

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up-a-notch responds:

thanks :D

In answer to your question...

... No

I think that the fact you've not really put as much effort in here as possible does count against it, with the fact that the feet are two different sizes - if you're going to go for a symmetrical looking piece, you do need to get the details correct. The fur on the thing seems to have little detail outside of the edges.

I would suggest a lot of work is required on the background, since it looks like some sort of scribbled colour fill that has been blurred out. I think that with how this looks, you need to work a lot on making the piece fit to the background, or rather the background suit the image that you've created.

Don't get me wrong, you've done some good detail on the eyes, it's just that the detail needs to be continued with the rest of the piece.

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up-a-notch responds:

ok...

...

The drawing itself is pretty cool, the idea is nice, but there are a lot of bad things, the drawing could have more work into it, because it seems that you just detailed the eye, and said ''Fuck the rest!!'', because the lines are very sloppy.

The creature looks very funny, i liked that, and I also liked the boring expression it has, it's really funny to see... The feet are very bad drawed, it seems like a child draw, I know it's very hard to draw feet, but you can make way better than a 3 finger foot!!

Anyways, the idea was very nice, but you kind of messed it, you can improve your skills, always looking for better results...

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Roger

up-a-notch responds:

thanks

I like it

I do like this one, the purple egg like shaped creature is differant, the backrounds could use some work as its kinda plain but it also works because you dont really want to take away from the alien atleast thats what i think it is. as i explained before you need to give more darker tones and shades to give it the darker fell. anyways good luck in future stuffs

Improve on darker shades and colors aswell as something with the backrounds

~X~

up-a-notch responds:

ok sure

Nice idea

The idea of the pic os very nice, but the drawing could use some more work.

There are some sloppy lines, especially on the left hand side of the picture, where that one outline of the creature is nearly all over the place. Also, there's a small black dot right next to the character, which also doesn't look too good.

But apart from that the picture does look nice, even though it's rather strange, that the feet are still on the down-side, while everything else is upside down. ^^

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up-a-notch responds:

lol thnks

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Mar 12, 2010
3:26 PM EST
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