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Reviews for "The Twilight"

Oh

I see, she "is have" demon!

Blah! Blah! this is poorly drawn, and there isn't even an attempt at animation.

.....*twitch*....

ummm, yeah. It was too short to make a point. and the drawnings were in need of work. I was actually waiting for demon power to appear. Please work on the second part if there is one

Well I liked the music

But to be honest the graphics sucked and it was sluggih, mabye if you tried harder!

ooo yay

the animation style was almost as bad as poorly drawn stick figures. was there an actual point to that? a character identity parole and a little ermmm... story? ok

Its a good start but. . .

Here are some suggestions for your next flash movie
1) Try to compress the sound file or use a sound loop, it will make the file size much smaller.
2) Try to use motion tweens in your movie, it will make it more interesting and less choppy.
3) If you are going to use text speech then include buttons so the viewer has enough time to read all of the text bubbles.

It appeared that you put effort into this flash so I will give you a 2, but follow my suggestions and keep on improving.