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Reviews for "The Twilight"

that sucked

all you did was take sound from .hack//sign(which i was expecting because of the title)and add that to your horrendously draw anime characters. It sickens me how you chose to use sound as good as .hack's and thrown it over your shitty drawings. The style didnt even match the mood of the song! Please dont bother submiting another movie. Ever

im sry, i couldnt even watch half of this movie...

the graphics were crappy, and i couldnt stand the music...

ouch

Pretty lame. Stiff, no real animation, lot's of exposition. Ouuf. Hurt real bad.

wow

i admire the gayness of your work, it aint about a demon, its just a girl saying "yeah im gonna dance hey look love world peace ha ha ha im gonna fidn thwe love of my life". bullcrap

No. JUST. NO.

I'm not trying to be mean- but you need a lot of work before you should submit anything.
As has been previously stated; There are a lot of plot holes (and things that don't even make any sense), it's too short, the art is lacking *to say the least*...I could go on forever. (Not only that but how you used the .Hack song made me rage >_>)
Google some art tutorials and maybe some tutorials on how to develop a plot line and character profiles.
You also should keep in mind, when creating a character; it's best to create their entire make-up first (interests, personality, hobbies, job, history, etc.) because these things tend to GREATLY influence how the character looks, dresses, and acts.