.....*twitch*....
ummm, yeah. It was too short to make a point. and the drawnings were in need of work. I was actually waiting for demon power to appear. Please work on the second part if there is one
Reviews for "The Twilight"
Meh. . . Kinda pointless.
Wait. . . Her father died TEN YEARS BEFORE SHE WAS BORN? O_O How does that work? And another thing, her mother was Twenty-one or so when she was born, so that means that she WAS ELEVEN YEARS OLD when he died... Work on the plot, it doesn't sync up and leaves more plot holes that crappy Fan-fiction. And the drawings could use some work, but I know it's hard to draw using a computer, but that's no excuse for your horrible grammar and spelling. Also, if the speech bubbles are to small, Then make then bigger! You really do need to work on this. :P And I also found the music EXTREMELY ANNOYING. O_O I know allot of other people liked it, but I detested it.
It is okay
Work on the drawings and slow down even I can't read that fast!
And I Read Really fast!
Awesome!!!
You did a wonderful job babe076311 i hope you make another on soon
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ok i havent finished weatchign it yet but i LOVE the music .hack//sign is my fav anime of all time!