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Reviews for "another try!"

this may sound weird but I was dissapointed

it wasn't as bad as everyone seems to be saying, I sau I'm dissapointed because as the first scene was loading it actually looked promising, I thought it was gonna be some mind trip type thing, then when I saw the gun the movie froze (I admit my computer can be slow at times...) and when I saw the gun and the tear I was like "oh cool!" cause thsi idea popped into my head that the movie was gonna be about the thoughts going through a mans head in the moments before he dies, if ya ask me that sounds like a cool idea... then I felt let down when I saw the little stick figure thing jump over the bar, and honestly I'm not sure what happened in the gun... it blew up in his hand? but I don't think it deserves a zero by any means... just make the whole movie like that first scene, it's pain staking but put as much detail into everything else as ya did in the eye and it'll be good, the first scene got my mind workin and for that ya get a 3

elkatra responds:

ckek out my new movie, mors a hero to become!!!!!

If it ain't ready....

then why would u like 2 submit it???
I'm gonna have 2 give it a 1.....

it's interesting

It's nice to see someone who can handle this kind of animation without it getting messy but I can't really tell what's going on and unless there's a reason you want to use blue for most of the movie give it more colors (ones that will help whatever feeling you're tryign to get, maybe more shades of blue) nice work so far

Not bad graphics

Not bad, finish the full version soon!

wow

a very well animated movie. just add sound. hehe. great job!