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Reviews for "another try!"

this may sound weird but I was dissapointed

it wasn't as bad as everyone seems to be saying, I sau I'm dissapointed because as the first scene was loading it actually looked promising, I thought it was gonna be some mind trip type thing, then when I saw the gun the movie froze (I admit my computer can be slow at times...) and when I saw the gun and the tear I was like "oh cool!" cause thsi idea popped into my head that the movie was gonna be about the thoughts going through a mans head in the moments before he dies, if ya ask me that sounds like a cool idea... then I felt let down when I saw the little stick figure thing jump over the bar, and honestly I'm not sure what happened in the gun... it blew up in his hand? but I don't think it deserves a zero by any means... just make the whole movie like that first scene, it's pain staking but put as much detail into everything else as ya did in the eye and it'll be good, the first scene got my mind workin and for that ya get a 3

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Well notbad, it was ok, i liked the blue style, it could have been abit longer, i also like the detail when showing inside the eye, maybe add a play button and replay button so it doesnt loop all the time, nice work though...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Frame by frame is always great...

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uh...

iit was good, except it needs sound and alot of work on the frame by frame. You said so, so its cool. Didn't notice it looped for a while lol.

I'm not sure.

I'm with that TaurusofRed guy on this one. I don't know what the hell happened there. There's an eye. Then there's a gun. Then a hand falls off. Then there's a stick guy jumping a counter. Then something falls off a shelf. Then you're right back to the eye. It's not a complete loss though. The animation (although not much of it) is blended nicely.

What the hell was that?

I never understood the point of submitting something when you admit you haven't finished it, why not just finish it first so people don't maul you?
I think, while the graphics were basic, the animation was really good. The flow was real smooth and i liked the style. BUT, nothing happened and it aint finished plus better quality drawings would be nice. I scored as high as i could. Submit the finished version cos i'm now curious as to what you can do.