This is not ready u say.....
...but u want us not to vote badly.. Well, have it ready before submitting it.. Wait..... from what I saw, just start over.
Reviews for "another try!"
What the hell was that?
I never understood the point of submitting something when you admit you haven't finished it, why not just finish it first so people don't maul you?
I think, while the graphics were basic, the animation was really good. The flow was real smooth and i liked the style. BUT, nothing happened and it aint finished plus better quality drawings would be nice. I scored as high as i could. Submit the finished version cos i'm now curious as to what you can do.
What? Give it a story-line
It needs a pre-loader with a message of what it is about - like a movie poster you see at the theatre.
Type slower - write - not writh
It needs a story/plot! - not just random drawings.
Add explosion sounds when appropriate.
Good animation though.
elkatra responds:
I don't really now how to make a preloader, but I try some things
thx for the tips
If "it's not ready"
why did you submit it (again)? Granted it's slightly longer this time, but the quality of the added frames is significantly worse than the stuff we already blammed. Finish and then come back with it.