Style over substance
This piece of work resembles a snippit from an explotiation flick. You obviously have a lot of talent artistically and a few moments exude grand style. Ok stuff I like: THe creepy vocals, the artwork, the blur effect when the hand points. Stuff i didn't like: No point. No message. Exploitative without a cause. Dwelling on the corpse for a little to long really killed the impact of the image. YOu could have cut a few seconds and made it way more disturbing. Obviously you have the talent to pull off this kind of stuff, you just need a little more substance. I look forward to when that time comes.