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Reviews for "SLICE O' DEATH (Pilot Episode)"
amazing
It's pretty enjoyable and evokes that early 2000s cartoon feel I really love. Just better acting for some of the lines could spice it up. Looking forward to see more.
StoutProductions responds:
Definitely something to improve for sure! Thanks a ton!
voice acting needs a bit of work but other than that well made.
StoutProductions responds:
Yeah, we're definitely going to work on that for next time. There was no budget for the project so it was just friends who were willing to pitch in haha.
Overall I liked it. Animation and art style are smooth and pleasing. The writing is fine but the exposition is very lacking and could use some work. As well as transitional dialogue. It didn't make sense as to why the characters knew so little about each other or what their plans were. I get that for drama sake that it the machine gun was a surprise but it doesn't play well with the characters having ever interacted before... even though they live together. I like what I saw and I hope to see some improvements with the series.