Great work
I loved your use of black and white and then color -- it was really striking in connection with the story. I think the main guy could have been developed a bit more, though -- maybe make him a bit more rebellious in his younger years before becoming a conformist. And the text was a bit distracting, with so much to read and trying to follow the action at the same time. But overall a very good job.
I cant get it to load past a certain point.
It stops loading about halfway through. I tried to stream it but it froze up. I really like what I see so far, but please fix the errors.
Breath-taking
This is a very well thought out storyline, and the visual add to the effect of the whole story. I like the fact that you added a pause button for the slower readers, and a fast-forward/rewing button if the viewer missed something. You are truly a great writer, as you vocabulary, and word structure is top notch. If you ever make a short story, or even (god forbid) a novel, please e-mail me at JuicyCracker@hotmail.com so I can enjoy it as much as I have this flash.
Awesome Job Oz.
Pretty good.
This refreshing short story was very gripping. However I have the feeling that, apart from the beginning, you made it up as you went along; there was no real ending or actual plot. Still, a nice movie.
Really cool, i rather liked it
That was really cool, and i managed to read the whole damn thing. When you add some animation into it, it's really cool, it's like a moving picture book. I'm impressed. I'll have to start reading and viewing more of your shit. Again, i apologize for my rude comments on Owl 1. Goodnight.