Hard to say
hehe. there're some funny parts in it. the voices are hard to hear sometimes - consider adding subtitles. Also, you could make the gfx more detailed.
Good job!
Reviews for "Jesus in... The MATRIX"
stealmyinternet responds:
shitty mic... part 2 will be cooler since i decided to actually put effort into intense battle animations
I liked it... kinda
Hey, I could see that you put a lot of effort into making this, and on the review bar, Ive given it a 3 because Newgrounds needs hard work... ORIGINAL hard work. But even though I did watch it all through and think it was pretty good... it was actually hard to watch. Im not exactly sure why, but for 1, I had to turn my speakers RIGHT the way up to make out the dialogue... the dialogue itself was good... but still...
And for a movie that is 735kb, I can't understand how the quality of sound was bad. Either get a better microphone, or put the publish settings up for sound. BUT you also probably want to take the image quality down to cut that filesize down... theres nothing worse than an average movie being over a mb big! But good work, and as this is your first (not blammed) submission, Id say that youve done pretty good. In someways its better than my first (and only surviving) submission... but my animation is better! =)
Well, keep the good work up, and I expect a lot more good work in the portal from you!
stealmyinternet responds:
cool. Is mine ORIGINAL? I dont like the way you emphasized ORIGINAL. Is there a hidden meaning there?
Needs Improvement
Audio is bloody awful. My only positive mark on the project is that the end scene with the bullet was nice. The rest is scrappable. Not on par with "Dangers of Drugs," but hey, I realize they can't all be winners.
stealmyinternet responds:
lol yeah this was my first flash movie. I was using Sound Recorder for the voices, now i use sound forge and its much better. Glad you liked Dangers of Druds, i think thats everyone's favorite.
funny to the max!!
although the sound quality was bad, but it is funny actually. the part where Jesus being thrown from the ass was funny but the other part was blurry because of the bad sound system.
its alright
i could definitely see some development into it, like have the agents be judas, and once jesus finds his little i can control thingies im so great powers like neo did he can become jesus christ superstar and then u could have some one he has to fight be maybe like joseph and his gay colored coat or whatever that movie was called. oh oh and to play along with the jesus christ superstar thing a little more u can combine that with the movie superstar so whenever jesus gets nervous he sticks his hands under his arms and then he smells em. thatd be cool