pretty dam good
for a first flash.
Reviews for "FANTASTIC shootout =)"
BazzMann responds:
yeh, it is, aint it? thanks mate, but WHY?? WHY THE 9 FOR VIOLENCE??? IVE SAID THIS TIME AND TIME AGAIN, YOU ONLY SEE BLOOD 1CE, NO OTHER PEOPLE ARE HIT!! anyway, cheers for the review, another smart NG user! =)
its ok but...........................
it needs a plot, there is too much senseless action going on. graphics bot too good either.
but ok nonetheless
BazzMann responds:
senseless action... we live it, breathe it, taste it every day. That could be the deeper meaning of the story, if you look past the 'mindless violence' of it... youll see a summary of the violent and comprehensively painful world around us... anyway, thanks for the accurate review, although you gave me too low a style, and too high overall rating in my opinion...
Good
But you need to put more detail into it. And a loading screen would be nice. Practice how to make the blood look better to. It was good for a first try though.
BazzMann responds:
positive feedback, sensible ratings, well-written review! Thanks man, see you symbolise the people that I make flash movies for! Im gonna try a whole lot harder after all these great reviews! But didnt you think the active streaming was pitched right? I tried everything in my power to avoid the dreaded 'getBytesLoaded' Loadscreen... maybe it should have a play button, or maybe ill just make a loadscreen...
Well lets see...
Good idea, can you find any other game with better sound effects, well at least you had sound :-), and try messin around with flash a little more. Other than that decent movie. I am givin you a 4. Ohh and that was one big trash can. :-P
BazzMann responds:
'Messing with flash'? Sure, the concepts were pretty much completely random, but after a year and a half of learning both Animation/actionscript in Flash (all versions), as long as I get a really good concept and lasting idea, I could make some damn good stuff! Unfortunately that hasnt happened yet... but my next movie will RULE! Thanks for the review, very well rounded, and you judged the violence appropriately unlike some other reviewers... cheers!
Good but not great
First of all, I'm glad to see that someone has put some effort in making a movie! The graphics were okay, not top-notch but very acceptable. Just like the sounds, which get a bit repetitive after a while, but hey, it's a shootout! I liked to see it, although there is room for improvement (as there is always).
I know you've tried to keep down the filesize, but a soundtrack (even a short loop from time to time) would freshen things up for sure. Also I'd like to see some facial expressions in a possible new version. Finally, this movie needs some kind of plot, a story of some kind. Even if it's only a short introductional (is that even a word?) story to this shootout.
So far my views on improvement, just keep 'em coming and I'll be watching!
BazzMann responds:
an appropriate title would be "above Mediocre but not fantastic..." but i like your style better! =) Sorry I havnt replied to any of the comments for a few days, but i am about 3/4 of the way through my new, improved story-movie. Im not going to say too much, just that it has a (slightly repetative) original loop, and Bill Gates, who's mad as hell! Thanks for the review... my new movie will be out soon!