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Reviews for "GTA Sucks"

Hey! This is actually REALLY good for a first animation! It had a good joke that got a laugh out of me, and the expressions on the characters are really good!
Now, since this is your first animation, I suppose you're off the hook, for now, but here's some things you can improve on:

The brush size is a bit too big. Now, this is probably the smallest thing, but here's the thing, if the brush size is too big, it really doesn't look aesthetically pleasing.

Next, the coloring is a bit. . . off. Now, it's not terrible, but it looks like you used the default colors for some things. A trick I learned is, when you pick a default color, make it a bit darker. It'll look nicer that way.

Third, I noticed that you kept the camera on the woman while the man was talking, and put the camera back on the man at the end. That really came off as a, sort of, excuse for not lip syncing and animating poses. I'd recommend putting the camera on the man, and putting it on the woman to see her reaction to what the man is saying, and back at the man, and back at the woman again.

Lastly, the animation loops. This can be annoying to some, so you can either export the animation to Swivel and upload this as a video file, or add a replay button. This can easily be fixed, though.

All in all, great job! I look forward to what you make in the future, and I'm adding you to my favorites!

Not bad!

For your first animation I think you did well. Sure, there is some stuff to work on and that need improvement, but I'm glad you actually tried to make a solid flash before submitting it to the portal. As a gamer myself, I can totally relate with this flash and GTA 5; I like when I can make relations during a viewing experience.

You can tell you have your own, bright style. Plus the movement animations of the characters mouths was good.

Voice acting wasn't too bad. It could use a little bit of work. More of preparation rather then quality. In other words you made it easy to tell that you were simply reading it, and that you weren't 100% ready before recording. Your animation is alright in some areas, but the lack of actual character body movement takes away from the flash.

A few things that you should work on for next are:

- Add a start/replay button.

- Practice voice acting. Really get into the habit of knowing your lines before recording (my opinion).

- More character animation.

With those tweaks I have a feeling your next flash will be 110% improved.

Above all great work, and keep practicing!

3/5

-fj

For a first animation this was actually pretty good. If there is anything I can say is that I'd recommend getting Swivel so the animation is not on loop. Aside from that just keep improving, and I think you'll be a pretty good animator. Good luck!

GTA V sucks because it's kinda boring, and the missions aren't too rewarding. I scoff at the idea of video games training someone to be a criminal though...

Animation is a bit basic, but the joke is decent.

Thats how many gta players are addicted to gta v like this man right here took over his life and his wife is annoyed by his los santos obession even gta online greedy pay 2 win cars and loads of content to keep them composed and addicted to them forever being a rockstar fan at bay.

That was the unhealthy relationship gta fanboys and rockstar from gta v