for a beginners animation, this was VERY good!
i liked the characters drawings, faces/face expressions, and the lip-syncing was pretty good, it matched the voice-acting perfectly.
i liked the story as well, it made fun of the GTA V popularity and it was pretty cool.
this movie needs a play/replay button, or a preloader, but other than that, it was GOOD.
you sir, are a good flash artist, and i would like to see more from you.
stick to good humour, and to the nice style that you use for your movie, and you will be fine.