Haha, very nice! But I must say I almost quited at the beggining with those chessy cheating jokes. The ending saved it.
Reviews for "How To Move On"
itsalexclark responds:
a joke is a joke - as long as there are more good ones than bad ones it's a win! :) thanks for watching and commenting .
Hey man, watched your video and I'm kind of split. One one hand, I liked the animation, the music, and I think your voiceover was very entertaining. But on the other, I just plain don't agree with any of this. I know it's just supposed to be a funny video, but I didn't find a story about cheating on your girlfriend in very good taste. Also, can't help but feel the presence of the objectivity of women in here a little bit.
Hm. Feels a little too like Swoozie IMO. Even some of the actual delivery.
Also, 90% of the focus was on the looks and sexual activity of the women. There's probably a reason you (or, ya know, this character) is attracting the sort of women you (or, ya know, he's) attracting.
Not terrible. Not great. Sounds like a three.
Everything is great, the visuals, the audio quality, the message you want to get out there. It's all there, and it's a great combination of good things.
But, you're way too happy, man! Way too happy! It just ruins the mood. Sorry, man. It's just...not really doing it for me.
Again with the shallow stuff. Small boobs and large belly? Stop judging girls based on looks.