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Reviews for "TOME Episode 08"

Like all the little easter eggs/ shout outs. I noticed someone point out that Red and Mace from parody rangers, and Liz's character Raleigh are facing eachother in the tiers for the quarter finals, and that the parody rangers moved on to face Sniperwheel in the second round . I hope something comes from that.

The buffer joke completely fooled me when I watched it on the website too. But I also noticed it hid Demon King's round one match too (he's also in the tiers) which was pretty smart.

Liked everything with Nylocke, Sniperwheel, and Saturndiva. Also Foreva, and Anneva were really fun too. Gosh Jon Tron was just had great acting all around this episode. I don't know how you directed him, but he seemed to have the most fun with his character. Every moment with him was gold.

One thing I think you should work on is Kirbopher's dialogue when he's depressed. When he's upset in this episode you tended to write him saying things I don't think he would say. One of the things I'm talking about his line "It's not something you should concern yourself with". I thought the words he used were out of character for him. With his personality I think it would make more sense for him to snap back, and say something like "I said don't worry aboutme! Worry about your own matches!". Because he's a passionate character y'know? Kirb's not dumb, but he's not as eloquent as Gamecrazed, who has such a big vocabulary.

Let's see what else. I thought the pacing was pretty good.

To be honest I'd like to see Alpha, actually miss his match after that cliffhanger just so we can see how he'd react and get more focus on him. Plus Zetto being so PvP happy, probably wouldn't be too happy about it, and I'd like to see how he would react too. I don't think Alpha's earned the winning spot in the tournament yet. He's so out of focus compared to the other main characters. It would feel really weird if he won. Unless there was some sort of twist where he learned how to control the forbidden power from Dustbunny or something and felt tempted to use it to cheat and win. If handled wrong that could be bad for his character I guess, but I would just like to see him move into a different direction.

Good episode. I liked the pacing even though some weird people on your website's comments section didn't. Webmaster lived up to my expectations completely. He was really cool. And Dustbunny, while we didn't see much of her, was interesting too.

Can't wait until the short, and the next episode!

Honestly, Kirbopher is over 90% of the reason I even come to newgrounds anymore. The quality of his work has risen my standards so much that most of the stuff on the site looks like one-day jobs. Yeah he's a professional of sorts, but I'd be lying if I said that the stories I have written in my head could be animated by anyone other than him and his network of helpers.

Jokez aside, that commentator chick really was annoying as hell lol

hahahaha this is great! The humor was well placed, kirbopher's attitude toward the others really left something to be craved, love the new characters and how the plot progresses although I have to admit the fight scenes were awesome my only complaint is how fast the episode finished. I can barely take the anticipation for the next episode thank you very much for making this.

Holy crap I got fooled by the buffering scene