Amazing work as always, Sif! You seem to have fixed up any framerate/spacing issues that people were talking about in your last piece; everything flows smoothly here. You've got great backgrounds and have really nailed down some great character designs and animation. Sound, story, and image all mesh well together with your concepts. The only thing I can say in the way of technical critique is that the father's mouth movement seems a bit off during his closeup shot. Still, that's only a minor scrape in an otherwise awesome piece!
Good luck in the tournament!