CRITISIZIMS:
Joke: very funny yes I agree
Animation: Good but needs to be more fluid.
Voices: good start for a solo animator.
Ketchup: Delicious
Reviews for "Ketchup Pump"
LeTravino responds:
Beautiful review
I have never worked in fastfood, but I imagine that cleanup would be a pain in the ass. I feel like you should've also covered the people taking 2-3 minutes to get their ketchup from these fucking things. Something about pump action condiments just turns most people into 8 year olds with downs.
Oh right, review. Animation was super clunky, but still a much better one than I could do.
i hate ketchup pump its terrible, worse since vending machine
This needs better humor. But the art style and voice acting remind me of Egoraptor. If you could fix that I would be glad to watch more of your stuff.
Are you in Egoraptor?