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Reviews for "Ketchup Pump"

The bad:
-Obviously very Egoraptor-inspired. In fact it's SO obviously Egoraptor-inspired that it feels ripoff-y.
-The jokes weren't funny. I understand the slice-of-life thing you seemed to be trying to do, but the topic wasn't funny to begin with and the execution of the jokes wasn't funny either.
-The acting is sub-par. It felt hardly rehearsed and of course the lines, having to do with the topic, weren't very good.
-The animation is extremely bland. It's way too simple. Not much is going on. Um... yeah. I'm not an expert on animation, so I don't know any fancy terminology.

The good:
-Your art style. It rules. I always enjoyed that crisp, clean style in animations such as this.
-The idea. I also enjoy that slice-of-life thingy like I mentioned.

So yeah... hope this was a fair review. 2.5/5. Right smack in the middle.

It was good, and I know everybody else is saying it. But like... you really did just copy egoraptor's style to the best of your ability. I would honestly prefer to see something you really design on your own. You tried to imitate the humor, the art style, the way they talk. I mena, it's not even that it's not cool, like, you can do that if you really want. It's just less impressive.

Everyone here can clearly see you have talent to animate and inspirations are good. But that's what they should remain as, inspirations. Don't get me wrong though, this wasn't that bad. Could it have been better? I dunno, that's for you to decide. Keep at it, you definitely can make some really great stuff.

Screw any haters that say you're ripping off egoraptor. It's not like he's got the market cornered on shaded cartoon characters making faces and talking with their hands. I mean the speech pattern is definitely like his but it's also just funny to listen to, which as far as I'm concerned is reason enough to use it in an animation. You're not stealing his material.

Anyway, I manage a Pizza Hut, so I feel your pain. 5/5 <3

EGORAPTOR MUCH?

Should have had the friend spill some while trying to use it.