This just in! This is FUCKIN' EGORAPTURE STYLE
Reviews for "Ketchup Pump"
I have never before, not even a single time, been tempted to post an "Egoraptor much" comment. But this... this screamed it so fucking loud that even after closing the tab that I watched this in and trying to move on, I was literally compelled to come back and say it.
The animation, the humor, the voices... it all comes off as a forgettable shadow of an Egoraptor animation. The humor was lacking at best, and the punch line so obvious that length felt somehow uncomfortable.
I am not trying to sound like an ass, as you clearly have developed a fair amount of skill, but this animation is simply not special or unique in any significant way.
Try developing a more unique visual style, and try to implant humor that goes beyond "screaming at the accurately depicted fuck-stick(s) that infest the world around us." The voices were not mind blowing, but if you are really a newbie, you are WAY better at that than many others I have seen.
Wait a second.
There are, there are people who use the ketchup pump in a way OTHER than putting the cup/fries under it?
How the...
Just what in the unholy mother of God are they doing?
This... this ketchup taste like egoraptor..!
I mean that in the kindest way though! Would be nice to see a bit more fluid animation... this is more animated comic
Not a bad little flash you've got going on here. The animation could use some smoothing out but all in all it works. You might want to invest in a quality vocal mic so that your audio doesn't offend your audiences ear holes though. You'll be amazed at how it will make a world of difference with the quality of your productions throughout.
Keep working at it and I hope to see more from you in the future!