That was a cute little touching story. Although there were a few mild bumps in the animation's momentum (Music and some tiny little parts in the animation) it didn't ruin the cute, sentimental tale that you were telling. Just as you've mentioned it felt rushed but again no blame should be thrown at your part. I was originally going to give you 2 in a half out of 5 but you've proved to me from my expectation and personal guess that it was going to be a film that was rushed and had no sensibilities or crafted taste you've proved me wrong friend. I enjoyed this short I really honestly did and to show for your troubles I want to bestow you a good well given score. a 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. You've done a wonderful job, I can see great artistic potential in you. Hopefully you won't feel rushed by anything or by anyone in your works due to deadlines or shrewd individuals, to me you deserve patience and toning on your works in order to get the satisfaction on knowing you did it right and perfectly. I hope you've enjoyed this review and I want you to have a pleasant day knowing you did well. Keep contributing my friend and stay creative. Good day.
Reviews for "Newborn Unicorn"
CaptainNick responds:
Storytelling is absolutely something I am working on. You picked a very accurate username Mr. Sage, I appreciate your kind words and the thought that went into this. My day definitely got better just by reading a well thought-out but honest review.
Keep on being wonderful.
It has potential. But not much. The art needs work, but most importantly, there needs to be a plot.
CaptainNick responds:
Mhmm, the plot is pretty sketchy. Thanks for letting me know, man.