One star. One star because your animation is good and your audio is mostly okay. This lacks story, plot, and it was just pointless to submit. There was no indication on whether it was part of something larger and still in the process of creation. If you take time to make bigger, better videos with your plot-lines and reduce the randomness by a lot, you will be a better success. If all you're going to submit is stuff like this, don't even bother submitting. Effort and time is key, friend, more effort and the time is all it takes for your animations to be of viewing value.