Interesting beginning to a storyline. I would suggest making the flying creature's cameo either more conspicuous or to make your mysterious choice more understood. For me, the sound effect wasn't enough of an indicator that something was. I also think that you can play around a little more with the main character; for instance, I loved the close up where his face was so jacked up and he happened to be asking about things being "weird." Congrats!
Reviews for "Evan is Unfortunate. "
kinda borin
Your submission, while voiced and animated just fine in my opinion; leaves much to be desired in terms of a cohesive storyline. If I hadn't looked at the tags for this flash I would have no idea dragons were involved. I guess Evan found himself in the north lands of Tamriel? Unfortunate.
at least the animation was cool, remember dude funny faces doesn't equal comedy
Try to make the land strange next time, so that he actually has a reason to be scared, because it makes no sense for him to be scared in a peaceful valley. Just saiyan.