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Reviews for "Evan is Unfortunate. "

Your animation is not bad, however I feel like there could have been alot more to this. I was very disappointed in it. Keep at it and you will do better! Audio isnt bad, still needs some fine tuning.

I cant give you any more than a one though. It was seriously lacking in most if not all area's.

One star. One star because your animation is good and your audio is mostly okay. This lacks story, plot, and it was just pointless to submit. There was no indication on whether it was part of something larger and still in the process of creation. If you take time to make bigger, better videos with your plot-lines and reduce the randomness by a lot, you will be a better success. If all you're going to submit is stuff like this, don't even bother submitting. Effort and time is key, friend, more effort and the time is all it takes for your animations to be of viewing value.

Try to make the land strange next time, so that he actually has a reason to be scared, because it makes no sense for him to be scared in a peaceful valley. Just saiyan.

animation good
cartoon wierd

end of story

Jawnduss responds:

thanks!... i think. lol

Great job, the animation is a definate improvement over the last one you made. Glad to see some improvement! Although, I would SERIOUSLY consider adding in a preloader, lots of people may not view this due to seeing a white screen.

Maverick, did you purposely add in the "I almost just wee'd" from the auditions? That was fucking hilarious haha.

Jawnduss responds:

Wait, what do i do with the preloader? i'm new to this.