Reviews for Last Dance (Part 1)

[tofolate]

A classic scary text-based adventure. Quite easy and simple.

Shroom-Cushion responds:

Thanks. I've always seen this kind of multi-choice games as easy, but amusing to read and go trough, no matter that all you do is just choose which way the story goes.

Cheers!

[laranee]

Story seems pretty interesting can't wait to see the rest. The art, although suitable for the storyline could be a bit more polished

Shroom-Cushion responds:

The storyline is quite unfinished and a bit... broken down into weird pieces, hopefully I'll be able to tie all the stuff together better on my second attempt.

Thanks!

[KyokukoChan]

It really is fun and I love the drawings even if they're not perfect.. it's obviously random some times, but that even makes it better =) Yeah.. It's worth a try and I spend like.. Just a few minutes ~ fast reader

Shroom-Cushion responds:

Thanks! Randomness is something people will have deal with at some points.

[cousteau]

Pretty nice for a first attempt at a game. Got me amused for quite a while, just trying to explore all the possibilities (needless to say, I found the easter egg) :D
Kinda liked the story.
+1 for Maslow's pyramid.

Shroom-Cushion responds:

Thanks, this is way more than I could have ever expected for my first attempt to reach. I mean, daily 4th is a really great motivator for a new person up in here.

+1 for knowing the name!

[Starp]

I give it a 4 not because anything is necessarily wrong, because I loved it. Even though it was very simple and short it was enthralling. Please, make a longer one!! and possibly next time dont make most of the choices as obvious, i would have liked to sit and decide which choice would be the best. And maybe each choice leads to a different path, not one choice killing you and the other not killing you. TYSM

Shroom-Cushion responds:

Thanks!

I'm already half done (one of the two arcs done) with the sequel. One arc so far is already bigger than this game and I still have the second one to make, which should be as big as the first choice arc. So yeah, it will be longer. I don't think the sequel will have a perfect system like that, where every choice has a meaning and effect on further development. I think it's slightly improved, but not that much. Though, I do want to make a project, unrelated to Last Dance, in which every single choice would have meaning and change the course of events significally, but I'll worry about that one in the future.

Cheers!