Not bad, good option choices and amusing medals just missing magic hands. The artowrk of the game could be improved with more detail maybe?
Reviews for "Last Dance (Part 1)"
Shroom-Cushion responds:
Thanks for the review.
Oh boy... if only the detail needed to be improved, I'd be in a much better place with the whole art thing. But thanks for the confidence! D:
Huh... I thought that Magic Hands would be the very first one to get, because of a very common beginning to many adventure games.
Well, I can't blame you for not having detail in your game. I actually found this to be a bit enjoyable, even if I couldn't understand any of it. I appreciate you trying to make something complicated. The music wasn't bad. What I didn't like was that I just didn't even understand how things even fit together here. It was a bit too descriptive and not that fun in the long run.
It does kind of make for a nice surreal game. I guess you just have to keep on clicking things in order to get the medals. There could have probably been some better details, but I guess it's not terrible. People who are bigger fans of these kinds of games should like it more. It should do fairly well.
Shroom-Cushion responds:
I'm not fully sure how is this complicated, but thanks for the review! With my art being... well - arse, I have to resort to text and being a bit too descriptive sometimes. I mean, that's kinda my thing now, I guess.
Some of it didn't make sense.
If I didn't grab the gun in the alley, why would it say I did?
Shroom-Cushion responds:
I'm not sure what are you refering to, but I imagine it's the part where you choose the gun at the windowless store? Because to get to that point, you must take the option to check is the bagman alright, and that option makes you take the weapon - the text says so, even if you didn't actually click TAKE WEAPON anywhere.
Cheers!
It has potential. The story seems rushed and bland. Same old zombie stuff. The art work is basic but works. If you work on the story, and expand on the choices, you just might have something here.
Shroom-Cushion responds:
Thanks.
Suggestion noted. I'll just drop this on first timer anxiety as an amazing excuse, though! Oh, and there aren't actually any zombies here. You know, yet. But anyway, will do the work for a better and more enjoyable piece!
Pretty interesting.
Going to try it a few more times possibly, I have hit nearly every choose. I think.
But no secret medal.
Shroom-Cushion responds:
Well you always have to work for the secret medal, more than you have to work for the others. Or you know, get lucky.
Thanks.