Kid's would love more storys like this in a whole book. perfect for bed time storys.
Reviews for "Everwynn Forest"
it's a cool story (for kids), but it really doesn't belong here on newgrounds (with most of the games being a bit TO much for little children) maybe it's time for kidsgrounds?
I LOVED this! I work with under 5's and my kids would love this story! Well done, your drawings are really pretty and full of life!
Wow, this is really neat. I wish I saw more of this on Newgrounds.
The art is excellent, being colorful and crisp as any children's book should be.The grammar was really good and simple, except that it really needs commas--lots of commas. Some periods should have been commas, and some commas need to be added. But you said it was old work, so it's not the biggest deal. PM me if you want me to list the places I'm talking about.
Overall, I'm thinking that this might be a book worth publishing. Maybe it's worth another look?
Hyptosis responds:
Thank you so much!
It's nice, the art and the story is like full of feeling and ist's prefect for a little baby, you don't see this kind of stuff in Newgrounds but looking at it from a different perspective it really deserves to be published.
Hyptosis responds:
Thanks for the kind words!