Was really good & you can see you put a lot of work into it. I like the animation & drawings, as well as the sounds & your idea. But what really dragged it down was no voice acting & the plot could move more smoothly & maybe better dialogue. You should continue this but also pick up the pace :)
Reviews for "Dragon Ball Multiverse 1"
Da hell did i just watch? Got up to the bit where the namekians landed on kami palace and just couldnt continue to watch out of overwhelming boredom. Maybe it gets better later, but you didnt intrest me enough to want to find out. You get 1 star because atleast there was SOME dialogue. And because its DBZ
bocodamondo responds:
its not my fault that Chapiter1 didn had alot of action on it..but thats how everyshows ep1 is..just base building.normaly action starts later, in this case from next chapiter 2.
It was an interesting take on the Dragon Ball universe, and I'm looking forward to the next episode. The subtitles could use a rewrite to correct spelling mistakes and make it more sensible in places. Also, the subtitles move by very quickly at times, making it very hard to follow the story.
I don't mind the lack of voice acting, since getting so many voices would take a huge effort, and fans might start complaining if all the voices don't sound 100% correct.
The animation was decent but could use some polish, but that will probably come automatically as you get better.
A decent adaption, I must say. Animation was... okay. Nothing spectacular, but at least I could watch it without wincing. Please DON'T get voice actors... The quality is already questionable, and if the "Clock's" voice is any indication, voice acting will just make it worse.
Aside from that, I like the story (even though I've read the original already) and I like the way everything was handled. More of this, please!
bocodamondo responds:
im sorry. but theres to many pepole says i should get voices...it might end up dissapointing ...but trying and fail is some times better then not trying at all.
the clock wont appear again...atleast not so far as i know
I don't think I'm a fan but I really liked it.
And for voices You could take samples from the series in japanese. It doesn't really have to match the text. I know that's totally silly but perhaps You are silly too? (No offense, I know, I am!)
bocodamondo responds:
haha i guess i am silly ^^
but neh. i will have real voices for next episode instead of voice clips...because i saw some guys doing that in YT. taking voice clips. and it was very pathetic and bad. so id rather have it voiceless then put voice clips on it