It was good.
I like the paper mario theme. I only wish the text would scroll faster. That's just me.
Reviews for "A Paper Mario Story"
SyuleeArbe responds:
Hmm, I'll make it so it scrolls faster when you press a button... Well time to learn some more AS!
It's okay...
I'm sure once the plot shows itself it will be a lot more interesting.
SyuleeArbe responds:
Yeah this one was sort of just to introduce the characters and setting, so I could add on to it without having odd ends everywhere. I'm still pretty new to writing, but its a lot of fun.
We dont take kindly the thieves 'round here
lol... very entertaining. Keep up the great work :D
- Faust
SyuleeArbe responds:
Haha, I'm glad you liked it. I'll try and make the next one even better. I was tempted to right this response in html, because I'm a rebel.
It was okay
Story's not TOO bad, but I give it a 7 cuz of the music/sfx quality. I hope to see more of your work c:
SyuleeArbe responds:
Ehhh, well that counts for something :D. I had to compress the sounds by a lot so it wouldn't be 10mb. Thanks for the review!