call me a critic but.
the story line is brought very nice and understandable for a non-vocal animation.
altough.... the sounds sounded impure. cracks all over it. that really brings it down.
not too much work to fix id figure.
the animation.... well.... not too bad. but could be better.
maybe make the lines smoother. also with the scene where u only see a part of the face and the shadows of the arms, u clearly saw the 3 pieces wich u joined togheter.
overall a good flash
some beauty issues here and there.
my conclussion?(personal.. dont go hating me for it)
story line: perfectly brought for a non-vocal
sound: cracking too much for my taste. (maybe search for bettter versions?)
animation: its not a beautyfull animation. but it does the job.
keep up the good work and keep improving
greetings,
serdiss