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Reviews for "Rise Of The Gunslinger"

decent animation and story

the animation wasn't the best but I've seen FAR worse, so i won't dog you too hard about it. Clean up the line work and invest some time in the smaller details and you'll be golden. The coloring and character design were all pretty good, can't complain too much there. It's pretty difficult to make a silent movie interesting, but this was fun to watch and I enjoyed it, so props to you on that. The two random guys who shoot his hat off at one point were wholly unnecessary and didn't add much. Also, it's cliche and overdone for stuff like that to happen in westerns, so it's something to avoid. As for the story itself, not too original but well executed in any case. Finally, as a suggestion for future projects, don't make the protagonist invincible, its hard to relate to a character that can't get hurt and has no fear. Also, more blood would be nice, but that's just my preference. Don't go overboard, either, but when a guy gets shot in the head, there's gonna be more blood and brains than just a little red dot. All in all, a good animation. Keep working at it.

savage011 responds:

thanks indigowraithe, your right about my line work, i definetly need to improve on that. I added the two guys to show that the protagonist wasnt a ruthless killer, and he was only interest in pursuing the one guy he was after.

Massive Props For Well Executed Silent Story Usage

While the artwork could be better, you did an impeccable job of conveying everything in your story coherently without using a single word or sound effect. Also, I really loved the motif of the musical pocket-watch. I'd say more, but I don't want to spoil the movie's ending for anyone.

savage011 responds:

this is my favorite review so far :) thanks for the positive feedback stuff like this helps me a lot.

story

its supposed to be a western version of kill bill? movie that originaaly i didnt like, the anmation is bad but could be worse, and the story is void

savage011 responds:

ive never seen kill bill before, i assure you i had no intention of copying that. Also care to elaborate on why the animation is bad and why the story is void?

Very good tribute ...

to Sergio Leone and all the spaghetti genre.

PS : Where's your credit to Ennio Morricone's music ?

savage011 responds:

oops ill add that in the description box

Really good revenge story

The animation wasn't the greatest but it had it's moments. I liked the hand holding the music maker/pocket-watch thing, that was animated well. I got the point regardless. Although this type of story has been done quite a bit, I still believe this flash makes a good addition to stories of revenge and justice in the old west.

savage011 responds:

thanks a lot brotha