Hmmmmkay?
I've seen some pretty impressive "emotional" games, but alas, this was not one for me. The music was nice, but reading some vague sentences, walking forward, reading more vague sentences, walking forward, reading more vague sentences (by the way, is Mery a name? The name of the woman? The script/grammar wasn't great, so hard to tell?) then walking forward and having the game end is downright lazy. If it is your very first try at game creation, then kudos, you've made it further than I. However, I would hone my skills with scripting, graphics, gameplay, and story before I would attempt to stand side-by-side with some of this site's bigger names. Not sure why this was frontpaged, sorry if I seem harsh, but hopefully mine and others' constructive criticisms will help mold you into a FABulous designer.