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Reviews for "Closed In Addendum"

Cool story but the one the endings doesn't jive

So cool interactive story with multiple endings

Some SPOILERS....
The ending of betrayal doesn't not make sense. How can you call refusing to jump to your death after a lover betrayal? That is called stupidity and suicide.

Good concept but poorly excecuted

Let me start saying that I understood What you were trying to do and I congratulate you for trying to do something diferent and creative, sadly there are many flaws that get in the way.

-I liked the graphics you used, if you ask me they fit perfect for the setting and I myself am a personal fan of vector graphics.

-The Plot itself or should I say the relationship between the main characters is barely touched in the game and that is a huge problem in thsi game since the whole point if these kind of projects is to get the player to care and udnerstand ur characcter that could ve been solved by adding a few flashbacks mini cutscenes during the gameplay.

-The Movement is little bit slow but once again I think it fits the style, but if you ask me those hazards a totally out of place and shouldnt had been there in the first place.

-As Far as the ending went i chose to jumo but because I thought I was going to explore or something xD, the truth is the quote you used there while very beautiful is missplaced, suicide over the death of a lover is not a sign of neither of strenght ot true love is a sign of obssesion. In real love you would have wanted to move on get stronger and just show that person you loved just how big have you become thanks to his/her memories.

Overal a good project but poorly excecuted should ve focused more on the characters.

It's OK, but ...

I was a bit confused as to what was going on. It was like starting a new book from the middle.

Also, the girl moved too slow and I found that annoying.

But good work.

Artistic

Maybe Someone way too much on a word "Game" but for me this is "Art"
+8 Star for Graphics nice using combination tecnique and space
-3 Star for Storyline, Is It really Royalty?

Interesting

Sweet gesture.