omg not more symbolism
well it was good
Reviews for "The String"
Hey I voted 4 on this & everything but...
WTF FUCKING SHIT IS THIS CRAP 'BOUT?!
So she's was led to her death by string?
This is one messed up video man
Good Style
I liked the overall style of your artwork. Nice illustrative feel, especially with the paper effect. I got the gist of the story, but the "editing style" could have been more thematic. The movie clip animation was pretty basic at times. While it could be said that was part of the style; if it was, it was lacking in intentionality, because it's not up to par with your good drawing skills. As you progress in animation with your slick style of artwork, I foresee some even more polished work.
Bleak-Creep responds:
Thanks. I'm definitely limited in what I can do animation wise right now, I'm pretty much self taught in flash, so that played a role in some scenes looking less polished than others. I enjoy animating however, and I'd really like to improve my abilities. I think more experience will really help.
Love your style,
Yet, it seems like the story'd be stronger without all that text--at least, I didn't feel that they added anything your visuals weren't already implying.