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Reviews for "The String"

I liked it

It was a great animation, I didn't have nay problem reading the text. I took one star off because...it was a little boring. Continue the good work.

errrr

yea it was pretty good xD but i was misled lol, when i saw the title i thought ''G string'' but this is still good anyways lol

ummmmm

Creepy enough?

yeah..? uhh...what?!

Like the animation fits the story that i think you're trying to tell but to be honest i don't understand wtf it's about...all i saw was that she was restless and all it did was lead her to death or something along that...

Death

kinda reminds me of a scene of monthy pithon's "meaning of life". The message is nothing too original, but i guess it's okay in this case. A hint: the animation could be fairly understandable even without the comments, if you had added a few scenes i.e. the sun that goes down and the moon that rises. That would've get rid of the "and then began night" comment. Those comment lines just ruined the atmosphere, and in a flash like this, atmosphere is EVERYTHING.